Friday, August 29, 2008

Randommax Haikus

These haikus were supposed to reflect the colours and moods of our way to the creative writing class, which was at 8 o'clock in the morning. Our attempts. People are free to comment and laugh at us.

Sleep deprived.
Food deprived.
Boys rush to class.

Sky shining like glass.
While I walk.
Which changes as i think.

A new day.
Auspiciously yellow.
My eyes, red.

One more added.

a summer morning
boy wears Che,
on a Gucci t-shirt

This one is for a girl
a spring morning
garden of flowers
you add colors to it


cl said...

You forgot bath-deprived :P

Kommu said...

ha ha.

may we know who you are?

cl said...

guess guess.
Coffee for the correct guess in three attempts.